Many university graduates cannot find a job in their chosen profession. What factors may have caused this situation and what in your opinion should be done about it? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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of

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university graduates

is

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troubled to find

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a job

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job

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jobs

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based on their line of

work

, there are some factors that may cause

this

phenomenon

happening

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. I think that lack of

jobs opportunity

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job opportunities

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and unqualified

standard

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standards

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for

experience

that needed are the

reason

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why they cannot find

work

in line with their expertise. There

are

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limited

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a limited

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spot

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spots

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for skilled workers

due to

maximum

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man power

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needed. Based on my

experience

, a middle-class company only

need

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1 or 2

person

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of tax officers to calculate their tax numbers,

furthermore

, the company

that is

hiring only want to recruit the best of the best to

work

on

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their place. The candidate who

have

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standard

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skills

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set will need to compete with

best

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graduates and

experience

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experienced

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job

seeker

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seekers

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to take those spots.

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, the bachelors need to have

an

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experience

to

work

on

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those position

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.

Experience

is gained by working,

as

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the

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times

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goes by, the

bachelors

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bachelor

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become

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a skilled worker.

On the contrary

, in My own country

jobs

have an overqualified standard,

for example

, a business development staff need 2 years

experienced

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of experience

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to be qualified.

This

standard

is become

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a big obstacle for new

candidate

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candidates

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to

work

in

jobs

that they

meant

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to. In conclusion, many fresh graduates have

a

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fierce competition to find

jobs

because they compete with more competent in knowledge and skill. They need to improve their proficiency when in college to increase their chance

to get

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their dream job.