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The line graph indicates the UK acid rain emissions over 17 years

The line graph indicates the UK acid rain emissions over 17 years
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The graph illustrates the
pollution
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 from
acid
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rain
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 in the UK between 1991 and 2007.
Overall
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, the
pollution
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 of
acid
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rain
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 declined over the period. Meanwhile,
pollution
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 from transport and communication remains stable throughout the period. In 1991, a big
pollution
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 production resulted from electricity, gas and water supply of approximately 3.5
million
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tonnes
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 a
year
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. Far higher than industries, transportation communication and domestic, which resulted below 2,5
million
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 tones a
year
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.
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, electricity, gas, and water supply significantly decrease, resulting in
acid
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rain
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 waste over the period of 17 years. It finished at 0,5
million
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tonnes
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 in 2007.
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, transportation and communication contributed to the production of
acid
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rain
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 being relatively stable in position number two from the bottom after domestic.
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 there was a slight increase to a peak in 2005 at 1
million
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tonnes
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 a
year
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, it went back to decrease about 0,5
million
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tonnes
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 a
year
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words pollution, acid, rain, million, tonnes, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • emissions
  • acidification
  • sulfur dioxide
  • nitrogen oxides
  • pH level
  • environmental regulations
  • renewable energy
  • fossil fuels
  • catalytic converters
  • industrial activity
  • green initiatives
  • climate policy
  • air quality
  • sustainable practices
  • emission controls
  • atmospheric deposition
  • long-term trends
  • environmental impact
  • carbon footprint
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