The line graph indicates the UK acid rain emissions over 17 years
The graph illustrates the
pollution
from acid
rain
in the UK between 1991 and 2007. Overall
, the pollution
of acid
rain
declined over the period. Meanwhile, pollution
from transport and communication remains stable throughout the period.
In 1991, a big pollution
production resulted from electricity, gas and water supply of approximately 3.5 million
tonnes
a year
. Far higher than industries, transportation communication and domestic, which resulted below 2,5 million
tones a year
. However
, electricity, gas, and water supply significantly decrease, resulting in acid
rain
waste over the period of 17 years. It finished at 0,5 million
tonnes
in 2007.
In contrast
, transportation and communication contributed to the production of acid
rain
being relatively stable in position number two from the bottom after domestic. Although
there was a slight increase to a peak in 2005 at 1 million
tonnes
a year
, it went back to decrease about 0,5 million
tonnes
a year
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