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the graph below shows the percentages of people in different age groups to the gym at least once a month in Europe from 1998 to 2018 and the projection

the graph below shows the percentages of people in different age groups to the gym at least once a month in Europe from 1998 to 2018 and the projection
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The line chart compares the proportion of citizens in different
age
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 groups who worked out at
gyms
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 at least one time per month in European societies over a twenty-year period between 1998 and 2018.
Overall
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, individuals who are 18-24
years
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 of
age
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 spend much more hours at
gyms
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 in comparison with other
age
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 communities.
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, elderly
adults
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 who are 45 and over were less eager to
do
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exercise at
gyms
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.
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 evident is, in 1990 both the 25-34-year-old group and the 18-24, formed about 9%,
while
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, residents between 35 and 44
years
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 old
as well as
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 45 and over, accounted for solely 4% of participants at
gyms
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. An important fact is in 1998 young
adults
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 who are between 18-24 reached almost 30% and overtook
adults
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 between 24-35. What stands out from the chart is in 2006 the
age
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 group of 18-24 soared to 60%,
whereas
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 the 35-44
years
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 individuals started to rise more sharply. In 2010,
although
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 45
years
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old
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and
over
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community peaked at virtually 20% , they are still responsible for the smallest percentage of
active
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the active
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 population.
In addition
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,
adults
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 in
a
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the
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 range of 18-24 saw their peak again in 2010.
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