the graph below shows the percentages of people in different age groups to the gym at least once a month in Europe from 1998 to 2018 and the projection

The line chart compares the proportion of citizens in different

age

groups who worked out at

gyms

at least one time per month in European societies over a twenty-year period between 1998 and 2018.

Overall

, individuals who are 18-24

years

of

age

spend much more hours at

gyms

in comparison with other

age

communities.

In contrast

, elderly

adults

who are 45 and over were less eager to

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exercise at

gyms

.

Also

evident is, in 1990 both the 25-34-year-old group and the 18-24, formed about 9%,

while

, residents between 35 and 44

years

old

as well as

45 and over, accounted for solely 4% of participants at

gyms

. An important fact is in 1998 young

adults

who are between 18-24 reached almost 30% and overtook

adults

between 24-35. What stands out from the chart is in 2006 the

age

group of 18-24 soared to 60%,

whereas

the 35-44

years

individuals started to rise more sharply. In 2010,

although

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years

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community peaked at virtually 20% , they are still responsible for the smallest percentage of

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population.

In addition

,

adults

in

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range of 18-24 saw their peak again in 2010.