The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart shows the percentages of
men
and Use synonyms
women
with Use synonyms
illiteracy
in different parts of the world Use synonyms
last
year. Linking Words
Overall
, we can see that Linking Words
women
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are
higher levels of Verb problem
have
illiteracy
than Use synonyms
men
.
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Develop
countries have the lowest levels of Wrong verb form
Developed
illiteracy
on the chart. Only one Use synonyms
Use synonyms
percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
men
and two Use synonyms
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percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
women
are Use synonyms
Use synonyms
illiteracy
. Replace the word
illiterate
However
, in Latin American and Caribbean countries the Linking Words
Use synonyms
percent
is higher with ten Replace the word
percentage
Use synonyms
percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
men
and Use synonyms
Correct article usage
a little
little
more Correct quantifier usage
few
women
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, In East Asia and Linking Words
Oceania
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Oceania,
less
Change the quantifier
fewer
men
are illiterate than in Latin America and Caribbean countries but the figure for Use synonyms
women
is much Use synonyms
more
higher at 20%. In Change the word
apply
Sub Saharan
Africa rates are more than twice in East Asia and Oceania. More than thirty Add a hyphen
Sub-Saharan
percent
of Use synonyms
men
and a little Use synonyms
lesser
than fifty Correct word choice
less
percent
of Use synonyms
women
. Use synonyms
On the other hand
in Arab states Linking Words
this
gap is even Linking Words
more
with less than thirty Correct quantifier usage
apply
percentage
of Replace the word
per cent
men
and more than fifty Use synonyms
Use synonyms
percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
women
can’t read or Use synonyms
write
. South Asia has the highest Wrong verb form
writing
illiteracy
rates on the chart for both Use synonyms
men
and Use synonyms
women
.Use synonyms
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