You are going to spend your vacation in a city in a foreign country. You have never been there before. Your cousin has a friend who lives there. Write a letter to the friend. In your letter •* introduce yourself •*say why you are making this trip •*ask some questions about the city (e.g., places to see, things to do, things to bring)
One of the
buring
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burning
issue
of Change to a plural noun
issues
todays
world, There are many Change to a genitive case
today's
technologyand
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technology and
machine
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machines
develop
in our country and Wrong verb form
developed
other
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another city
other cities
city
. Like smart computers, Tuchscreen
Mobile and Correct your spelling
Touchscreen
many
more Replace the quantifier
much
technology
. Some Change to a plural noun
technologies
Parens
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Parents
belive
that, Correct your spelling
believe
This
Machine is not good for their children's
and other people except that. Change noun form
children
this
technology is uesful
to their child. Correct your spelling
useful
This
essay I will Change preposition
In this
study
and discuss some pros and crons
and Correct your spelling
cons
writed
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write
below
paragraph.
To commence with, Correct article usage
the below
computer
and mobile Fix the agreement mistake
computers
phone
is very helpful to our society and Fix the agreement mistake
phones
city
. Their
help our Correct pronoun usage
They
children
study
and knowledge. This
is very useful to counrty
. some Correct your spelling
country
youngstars
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youngsters
young stars
everyday
collect new information Replace the word
every day
to
their machine and Change preposition
from
shere
with their Correct your spelling
share
frined
and caretaker. Correct your spelling
friends
As
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For
a
reason, Correct determiner usage
this
student
and young Fix the agreement mistake
students
children
come to their house
and spend Fix the agreement mistake
houses
time
with mobile
or CPU and play with their Correct pronoun usage
their mobile
friend
, talk with Fix the agreement mistake
friends
their
and Correct pronoun usage
them
fun
with Add a missing verb
have fun
their
. Correct pronoun usage
them
For example
, Few
ago one of the Correct article usage
a Few
aritical
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critical
time
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times
is
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was
corona
. many Add an article
the corona
city
's lockdown
and students Change to a plural noun
lockdowns
children
's spend all time
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their time
home
after corona many schools and Change preposition
at home
clessess
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classes
tech
their Correct your spelling
teach
study
to online like
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with
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a laptop
laptop
, Fix the agreement mistake
laptops
microcomputer
, Fix the agreement mistake
microcomputers
Phone
, Fix the agreement mistake
Phones
notebook
and more.
On the other said of cion , There are many Fix the agreement mistake
notebooks
negaetive
points to using Correct your spelling
negative
tablet
or Fix the agreement mistake
tablets
smartphone
. many Fix the agreement mistake
smartphones
children
After going to school they
spend all Correct pronoun usage
apply
time
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their time
desktop
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on desktop
computer
even many Fix the agreement mistake
computers
youngstars
and childcare Correct your spelling
young
also
spend time
with technology. For
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To
explian
, There is not good for student Correct your spelling
explain
ans
they don't focus Correct your spelling
and
their
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on their
study
and other activityes
likeCorrect your spelling
activities
,
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apply
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the outdoor
outdoor
and second Replace the word
outdoors
time
with adules
and more. Correct your spelling
modules
adults
Hence
, They setting
all day frond on Verb problem
sit
chair
and they suffer a lot, like Add an article
a chair
the chair
backpain
, eyes Correct your spelling
back pain
problem
, Fix the agreement mistake
problems
bren problen
and more.
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brain problems
For
conclusion, Change preposition
In
some
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sometimes
time
it is a
good for our generation and some Change the article
apply
time
not good for our childrent
. In my Correct your spelling
children
opinion
it is Add a comma
opinion,
a
good for our Change the article
apply
city
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task achievement
Ensure that you address the topic directly and maintain focus on the specifics of the task. Introduce yourself precisely, explain the reason for your trip, and ask questions relevant to the visit. Avoid discussing unrelated topics.
coherence cohesion
Structure your letter with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. Greet the reader at the start and sign off properly at the end to maintain the format of a personal letter.
coherence cohesion
Divide your writing into paragraphs, each with a single, clear idea. Ensure that each paragraph transitions smoothly to the next while remaining focused on the topic of the paragraph.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.