The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of junk food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000
The line graph below demonstrates
difference
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the difference
of
junk food Change preposition
in
consumption
by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000. Units are measured in a
number of Correct article usage
the
times
eaten per year
.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that in the last
decades, consumption
of hamburgers was rised
significantly Correct your spelling
raised
risen
while
fish
and chips's
Change noun form
chips
consumption
was fall.
In the beginning, consumption
of fish
and chips
was the highest which is 100 times
per year
. Otherwise
, consumption
of hamburgers and pizza was lower and started on
the range between 5-10 Change preposition
in
times
per year
. Around 1985, pizza showed its dominance by taking over the number of times
eaten per year
from fish
and chips
and stand
strong on around 95 meals per Wrong verb form
standing
year
. However
, fish
and chips
only
65 Add a missing verb
are only
times
eaten
per Verb problem
apply
year
. In contrast
, pizza consumption
was
remained steady from 1995 to 2000 which is 85 Unnecessary verb
apply
times
eaten per year
. Hamburgers increase
significantly Wrong verb form
increased
Change preposition
to
into
100 Change preposition
to
times
eaten per year
in 2000.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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