The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last 20 years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion,

The patriarchal society where

women

take the feminine

role

, looking after their offspring

instead

of working has changed dramatically, where by now

women

also

work and aren't solely looking after the house. It is agreed that

women

are nurturers by nature and should take the

role

of the

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mother

more seriously, in order to raise their

children

with etiquette matters, which may be contradicted as within our modern epoch, times are changing and people believe in gender equality.

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essay will discuss how the reverse roles have subjectively changed for the worse, leading to a negative outcome, with confused roles. 

Firstly

,

according to

our genetics,

women

carry a

child

for a substantial amount for

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, they are

mothers

because of the unconditional love and

care

they can provide.

For instance

, by nature,

women

breastfeed the

child

and most prominent

parent

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within

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the offspring's life,

this

indicates that

mothers

have been created to take

care

of the

children

and

care

about their wellbeing.

Nevertheless

, if using their

time

efficiently,

mothers

can make

time

for both work and the

care

of their

children

. Another reason, heightening the decision to be a stay-at-home

mother

, is the

child

's mannerisms,

for example

, they are easily influenced and can be swayed on the wrong path, when the

mother

resides at home

instead

of working, she can essentially teach them wrong from right, being the uttermost important influence within their lives.

This

is

further

implimented

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implemented

within boarding school

children

,

which

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become resentful

to

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their teachers as they feel they are not obliged to follow

rules

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a stranger.

Although

the

mothers

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role

is crucial, it could be argued that

,

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both parents

role is

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crucial in

this

, as the

child

will ultimately

will

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be surrounded by both companies, meaning

mothers

could essentially work

part

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time

. In conclusion

mothers

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role

within

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the

child

's life is crucial, as not only do they

care

for the

child

but

also

teach them obedience.

This

may not be possible if they

chose

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to follow their careers. In my opinion, being a

mother

is a

full

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time

job, meaning they should merely take

care

of their

children

until they are old enough to be more independent.