The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps illustrate how to change the
City
Hospital's
road
accessibility between 2007 to 2010.
Overall
, the majority
og
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of
the
City
Hospital nearly remained
instead
of around the hospital area in which the new facilities and roads were built.
Firstly
, the Ring
Road
was connected with the
City
Road
by two roundabouts in 2010.
However
, bus stops were located on both sides of Hospital
Road
in 2007. After only three years, they were relocated to the west side of the same
road
with
a
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direct access to the two
roundabounts
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roundabouts
. In 2010, the car park was separated into private and public. The car park for hospital staff was the same place which was located
of
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left
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Hospital
Road
.
Otherwise
, the vehicle park for people was constructed just near to east side of
City
Hospital. In summary, over the years area of
City
Hospital was developed and became accessible easily for individuals.
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