The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps illustrate how to change the
City
Hospital's road
accessibility between 2007 to 2010. Overall
, the majority og
the Correct your spelling
of
City
Hospital nearly remained instead
of around the hospital area in which the new facilities and roads were built.
Firstly
, the Ring Road
was connected with the City
Road
by two roundabouts in 2010.However
, bus stops were located on both sides of Hospital Road
in 2007. After only three years, they were relocated to the west side of the same road
with a
direct access to the two Remove the article
apply
roundabounts
.
In 2010, the car park was separated into private and public. The car park for hospital staff was the same place which was located Correct your spelling
roundabouts
of
Change preposition
on
left
Correct article usage
the left
to
Change preposition
of
the
Hospital Correct article usage
apply
Road
. Otherwise
, the vehicle park for people was constructed just near to east side of City
Hospital.
In summary, over the years area of City
Hospital was developed and became accessible easily for individuals.Submitted by diland701 on
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