The two maps depict about some changes in the layout of Buduran beach town during the 29-year period since 1995.
The two maps give information about some changes in the layout of Buduran
beach
town during the 29-year period since 1995. From an overall
perspective, there have been significant transformations in the beach
town from industrial to be
more residential. Unnecessary verb
apply
In addition
, the most noticeable developments are in the green area and the fishing industry in
the Change preposition
on
beach
.
The green area which included
Wrong verb form
includes
forest
park and farmland Correct article usage
a forest
have
changed into a Change the verb form
has
sport
Change the noun form
sports
center
and it provides a golf course and two tennis courts. Change the spelling
centre
Moreover
, the fishing port has been eradicated to expand the sea in the south. However
, fish markets have been demolished to give space for the development of four-tower apartments. In front of the apartments, there are restaurants replacing the shopping center
in 1995.
Change the spelling
centre
On the other hand
, inhabitants side are adding several quota
for the building. They Change to a plural noun
quotas
constructs
with total of four houses Wrong verb form
will construct
during
2024 and set up the new road access Change preposition
in
in
the west Change preposition
on
sides
. Fix the agreement mistake
side
In addition
, the hotel around the beach
has built the
car area to Correct article usage
a
managed
the massive capacity of vehicles. Wrong verb form
manage
However
, café
stayed Correct article usage
the café
on
the same location Change preposition
in
during
1995 to 2024.Change preposition
from
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Vocabulary: Replace the words beach with synonyms.
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