The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph illustrates the information about gives information about car ownership in Britain in the period of 36 years between 1971 and 2007.
Overall
, ownership
two
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of two
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cars
and three or more
cars
tended
an
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to an
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upward trend and no car presented a downward trend,
while
one
car
a
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remain
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remained
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changed through the whole surveyed period. For the first 16 years, there was an uptrend in the
percentage
of two
cars
from under 10 per
cent
to 20 per
cent
. After, 1987 the
percentage
of two
cars
a
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apply
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rise
in
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by
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nearly 30 per
cent
.
Beside
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Besides
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from 1971 to 2007, the
percentage
of three or more
cars
a jump
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jumped
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in
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by
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18 per
cent
. from 1971 to 1987, the
percentage
of
one
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cars
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car
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a
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apply
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rise
in
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to
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45 per
cent
. Between 1987 and 2007, the
cars
one
line a drop in the
percentage
of
one
cars
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car
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about 2
percent
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per cent
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.
However
, during the period
of
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from
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1971 to 2007 the
percentage
of three or more
cars
a
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climb
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climbed
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in
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by
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8
percent
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per cent
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.
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