The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph illustrates the information about gives information about car ownership in Britain in the period of 36 years between 1971 and 2007.
Overall
, ownership two
Change preposition
of two
cars
and three or more cars
tended an
upward trend and no car presented a downward trend, Change preposition
to an
while
one
car a
Correct article usage
apply
remain
changed through the whole surveyed period.
For the first 16 years, there was an uptrend in the Wrong verb form
remained
percentage
of two cars
from under 10 per cent
to 20 per cent
. After, 1987 the percentage
of two cars
a
rise Correct article usage
apply
in
nearly 30 per Change preposition
by
cent
. Beside
from 1971 to 2007, the Correct your spelling
Besides
percentage
of three or more cars
a jump
Wrong verb form
jumped
in
18 per Change preposition
by
cent
.
from 1971 to 1987, the percentage
of one
Correct pronoun usage
apply
cars
Change to a singular noun
car
a
rise Correct article usage
apply
in
45 per Change preposition
to
cent
. Between 1987 and 2007, the cars
one
line a drop in the percentage
of one
cars
about 2 Change to a singular noun
car
percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
However
, during the period of
1971 to 2007 the Change preposition
from
percentage
of three or more cars
a
Correct article usage
apply
climb
Wrong verb form
climbed
in
8 Change preposition
by
percent
.Change the spelling
per cent
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