The Graph Above Shows Information About Employment Rates Across 6 Countries in 1995 and 2005
The bar chart details percentages of
employment's
rates (Change noun form
employment
man
and Fix the agreement mistake
men
woman
) in six countries, in 1995 and 2005. Fix the agreement mistake
women
Overall
, men dominated the workplace in six countries Linking Words
by
both years. The highest average Change preposition
in
of
working Change preposition
apply
rate
was Use synonyms
men
in 2005, Change preposition
for men
tough
the average Correct your spelling
though
rate
Use synonyms
of
Change preposition
for
women's
in 1995 was the lowest.
For the first year, 1995, more than 70% Change noun form
women
male
in Change preposition
of male
Iceland
was a worker, just above Use synonyms
Swtizerland
(roughly 65%) and 10% more than in New Correct your spelling
Switzerland
Zealand
, the Use synonyms
USA
, Use synonyms
Australia
, and the Use synonyms
UK
(close to 60%). Use synonyms
In contrast
by the same year, Linking Words
female
had lower percentages. Fix the agreement mistake
females
Swtizerland
ranked one with just about 55%, ahead of the Correct your spelling
Switzerland
UK
(closely 50%), followed by the Use synonyms
USA
and Use synonyms
Iceland
(barely 45%), and Use synonyms
lastly
Linking Words
Australia
and New Use synonyms
Zealand
(hardly 25%).
In terms of working Use synonyms
rate
in 2005, Use synonyms
Iceland
was ranked number one with more than 80%, slightly above Switzerland (around 78%). Use synonyms
Whereas
Linking Words
Australia
, the Use synonyms
UK
, New Use synonyms
Zealand
, and the Use synonyms
USA
grouped tightly Use synonyms
approximately
70%. Change preposition
at approximately
While
Linking Words
,
female's work Remove the comma
apply
rate
was considerably much lower. Switzerland was almost 70%, though in Use synonyms
this
category the Linking Words
UK
and the Use synonyms
USA
were the second (about 60%). Regarding the next Use synonyms
higest-number
of Correct your spelling
highest number
female's
working, Change noun form
females
Iceland
was just over 50%, Use synonyms
along with
Linking Words
Australia
and New Use synonyms
Zealand
(nearly 40%).Use synonyms
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