The chart below shows the value of one countries exports in various categories during 2015 in 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
The chart beneath depicts the export value of one country between 2015 and 2016. The table illustrates the difference in the ratio in each sector of export in 2015 and 2016.
Overall
, there were some fluctuations between the first and second years. Petroleum products were the highest achievers in both years. While
textiles were the losers in both years.In addition
, the textiles gained quarter than the first year
. However
, the gems and jewellery drained some ration in the second year
.
Firstly
, petroleum products earned 60 $ billion
in the 1st year
and almost 62 $ billion
in the 2nd year
with the help of an increase of 3%. While
engineered goods gained 58 $ billion
in 2015 and 61 $ billion
in 2016 ranked up 8.5% ratio. Moreover
, the gems and jewellery took 41 $ billion
in the first year
and 40 $ billion
in the second year
with a decreased ratio of 5.18% .
Secondly
, agricultural products earned 30 $ billion
in 2015 and almost 30.3 $ billion
ranked 0.81% which is not too much a percentage. To sum up
, textiles earned 27 $ billion
in 1st year
and 31 $ billion
in 2nd year
with the help of an increase of 15.24%. This
was the highest gainer in 2016.Submitted by shaheryarahmedat on
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