the diagram below shows the stages in the recycling of aluminium drinks cans. Summaris the information by selectin and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The graph illustrates the
recycle
process of Change the verb form
recycling
an aluminium
Correct the article-noun agreement
aluminium cans
an aluminium can
cans
. The whole algorithm consists of a
four main stages that are cycled in a loop. The third part itself contains four sub-steps in it. The process starts from collecting Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
a
future material and ends at a dealer point.
The first stage is in the Correct article usage
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center
of Change the spelling
centre
collection
, where aluminium Add an article
the collection
cans
are sorted from a
plastic, paper or organic trash and after that Correct article usage
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are
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is
send
to a recycling zone. At Change the form of the verb
sent
this
moment of a
production, Remove the article
apply
cans
are cleaned, squished and was
ready for Unnecessary verb
apply
a
following manipulation.
The third stage is a complex schema, that a combination of Correct article usage
the
a
four processes. Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
At
the Change preposition
In
beginning
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beginning,
cans
are melted down, after
that new aluminium is rolled Correct word choice
and after
to
a thin sheet. Change preposition
into
The next step is
when cans
are created from previously done material. At this
point cans
are ready for exploitation, so they can be send
to markets.Change the verb form
be sent
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