the diagram below shows the stages in the recycling of aluminium drinks cans. Summaris the information by selectin and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

the diagram below shows the stages in the recycling of aluminium drinks cans.

Summaris the information by selectin and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The graph illustrates the
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process of
an aluminium
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aluminium cans
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cans
. The whole algorithm consists of
a
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four main stages that are cycled in a loop. The third part itself contains four sub-steps in it. The process starts from collecting
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future material and ends at a dealer point. The first stage is in the
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of
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, where aluminium
cans
are sorted from
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plastic, paper or organic trash and after that
are
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send
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to a recycling zone. At
this
moment of
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production,
cans
are cleaned, squished and
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ready for
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following manipulation. The third stage is a complex schema, that a combination of
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four processes.
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the
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cans
are melted down,
after
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that new aluminium is rolled
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a thin sheet.
The next step is
when
cans
are created from previously done material. At
this
point
cans
are ready for exploitation, so they can
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to markets.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words cans with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sustainability
  • Recycling bins
  • Collection centers
  • Sorting
  • Debris
  • Compacting
  • Molten aluminium
  • Purification
  • Ingots
  • Rolled
  • Manufactured
  • Distribution
  • Energy consumption
  • Efficiency
  • Lifecycle
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