the diagram below shows the stages in the recycling of aluminium drinks cans. Summaris the information by selectin and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

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describe

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the

producation

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production

of aluminium cans. Overview, the diagram

contain

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mainly

few

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steps to complete the process which begins with collecting the garbegs

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and

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ends final products. As per the given information,

firstly

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, collect the used cans from the dustbin which are placed in the local market and area of the country

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then

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with the help of truck, these

are transfer

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to

recycling

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a recycling

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centre in that they wash and clear the can effectively.

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this

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this,

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the process

is start

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as old

can

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cans

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are melt

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down

with

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high

temperature

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temperatures

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which converted into new aluminium sheets. Moving towards

rest

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the rest

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of the detail

that

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apply

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, aluminium

sheet

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sheets

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are rolled up to form new cans. In

second

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last

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step

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steps

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steps,

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they provided

proper

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the proper

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shape to

can

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the can

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and

fill

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the cold drink into it

according to

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capacity

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the capacity

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of the can.

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but not least,

can

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cans

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are

label

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properly with

brand

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name and log

along with

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price

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the price

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of the can and

material

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the material

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which are used in the can.

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,

can

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the can

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is ready

to

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for

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sale in the market, again with

te

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the

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aids

od

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of

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trucks

can

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cans

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are

delivery

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to

markey

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or drinks machine, so that people can drink them and throw

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then

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them

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into the dustbin,

afterthat

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after that

process is again started.