The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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Both the pie charts present the results survey of visitors about how they rated Parkway
Hotel
in 5 level customer service for 5 years between 2005 and 2010. It can be seen that Parkway Hotel
increases the grade of the hotel
, from satisfactory to good and excellent.
First and foremost, looking at the first pie chart, almost half of the hotel
consumers experienced a
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satisfactory
by a percentage of 45%, Replace the word
satisfaction
moreover
, it was only 5% of guests rated the hotel
's service as excellent. Also
, the rest of the visitors rated 21% poor, 15% very poor and 14% good.
For the second data, Parkway Hotel
improved their service, and as a result
, customers gave 39% for good quality and 28% for excellent standard. On the other hand
, customers felt the very poor quality has decreased, by only 4%. While
the satisfactory 17%, 12% for poor quality.Submitted by hafidzaditaf1 on
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