The chart below shoes the percentage of households in owned and rented accomodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shoes the percentage of households in owned and rented accomodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart compares and contrasts the information about property status whether it was rented or owned by a family in England and Wales over a decade. In general, the owned accommodation showed a positive trend,
while
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the rented ones were continuously declining. It is interesting to note that in 1971, the statistics of these two variables illustrated the same percentage.
To begin
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with, in 1918 the private home started with a number of more than 20% and rose half to 30%. Interestingly, there was no development from 1939 to 1953,
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the figure of
this
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unsustainable private property increased and reached 70% in 2021.
However
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, it was
then
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lessened to about 60% in 2011. Moving on to the number of households who lived in the regularly paid property, it definitely showed the exact same trend but in a contrasting way.
First,
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it started with almost 80% of families living in rented places and
then
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decreased until it reached about 70% in 1939 and it was similar in 1953. The number performed an interrupted reduction until 2001,
along with
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a small improvement in 2011.
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