Nowadays, technology is being widely spread. In the following years, technology will totally replace the teacher role in the classroom. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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is being widely

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spread

. In the following years,

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will totally replace the

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role in the classroom. I disagree with that statement. In

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essay, I will elaborate

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I disagree that

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position can be replaced by

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. First of all,

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technology

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can not substitute the

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that the

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delivers to the

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.

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is not able to carry the senses which the teachers have to guide the

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, like seeing, listening, speaking and even feeling.

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is the important part for the

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to get motivated to study and achieve the best result.

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, a

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can observe that a

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looks demotivated in class by his expression. The

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can offer to the

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to have consultation whether the

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has a problem or not. If the

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has a problem, the

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can help and guide him to be more motivated and passionate in

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. With

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, the

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role is diminished. Another point worth noting is the disability of

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to build the

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character

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. The subject lessons that are presented in digital media do not directly convey the messages about

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development. Meanwhile, teachers can teach the

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about

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development and

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what they teach in front of the

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.

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, a

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tells the

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how to respect

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other people and be polite.

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, the

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embodies

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politeness by apologizing when he makes

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and saying please when he asks the

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to do something.

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, the

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can not cover that

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character building

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aspect. In conclusion, I disagree that

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can substitute

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in a classroom.

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can not cover the

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and

character

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development that the

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can deliver to the

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.