You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the man features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The following diagram illustrates the manufacture of milk annually in
Netherlands
, Australia, Tanzania and Guatemala, In 1990, 2000 and 2010. It is conspicuous Correct article usage
the Netherlands
Netherlands
and Australia produced more than others in these years.
Correct word choice
that Netherlands
According to
the table, Guatemala produced 26,000 litres
in 1990. Also
, 55,000 litres
was
manufactured in 2000 and eighty-four thousand Correct subject-verb agreement
were
litres
in 2010. Furthermore
, Tanzania supplied one hundred and fifty-five thousand litres
of milk in 2010 and almost 1,42,000 litres
of this
goods were generated in two thousands
. Change to singular
thousand
Moreover
, Netherlands
generated 11,262,000 Correct article usage
the Netherlands
litres
in 1990 also
11,155,000 litres
were supplied in 2000. In addition
, Netherlands
manufactured almost 11 million Correct article usage
the Netherlands
litres
in 2010.
In conclusion, this
chart demonstrates the output of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000, and 2010. It is obvious Guatemala had the lowest output in this
period. Plus, Netherlands
had the highest generation Correct article usage
the Netherlands
according to
the table.Submitted by bazarjanimohammadreza83 on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words netherlands, litres with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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