The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparions where relevant.
Represented chart illustrates how
energy
is produced by using geothermal energy
.
Generally, to generate energy
they evaporate water
and after using that steam
to produce energy
.
Firstly
, there is cold water
that is
pumped down by 4.5 km and after the injection
it Add a comma
injection,
is going
through a geothermal zone. Wrong verb form
goes
Geothermal
zone is Add an article
The geothermal
A geothermal
the
zone in which there are a lot of hot rocks and when cold Correct article usage
a
water
is going
through that place it becomes hot and produces Wrong verb form
goes
steam
. After heating till
Change preposition
to
temperature
which is needed they pump hot Correct article usage
the temperature
water
up by producing well
.
After, when hot Correct article usage
a well
water
is transported to the condenser it becomes steam
because of the temperature and this
steam
is used to power a turbine that
is turning
around when Wrong verb form
turns
steam
is going inside by producing more energy
. Then
, when it turns around till energy
is produced and after that
it is transferred to the generator which is powered by a turbine.Add a comma
that,
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