One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest?
Traffic
congestion has become a major problem in most cities as a result
of bad roads
and non-functional traffic
light
.Fix the agreement mistake
lights
However
, this
can be solved by construction
of good Add an article
the construction
roads
and provision
of Correct article usage
the provision
traffic
light
by the government.
To start with, one of the major reasons for Fix the agreement mistake
lights
traffic
in cities are
bad Correct subject-verb agreement
is
roads
.To elucidate further
, the city centers
are badly damaged with potholes and the Change the spelling
centres
the
Remove the redundancy
apply
roads
are narrow this
made most drivers to
drive at a slow pace and carefully in order to avoid being trapped in the potholes Change the verb form
apply
hence
, if they drive without caution their vehicles will get spoilt. As a result
of doing this
other cars behind will cue up waiting thereby causing congestion on the road
. For example
, a survey conducted by the chairman of Road
Correct article usage
the Road
safety corps
Imo chapter revealed that the rate of Correct your spelling
Safety Corps
traffic
in wethedral roundabout
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Wethedral Roundabout
as a result
of multiple potholes on the road
.He further
said that it get
worse during the rainy season. Change the verb form
gets
Secondly
, most of the traffic
light
are not functioning.Fix the agreement mistake
lights
In other
words
most people want to meet up at their various places of work,Add a comma
words,
they
lack patience and want to move at once without allowing other cars to take turns by so doing it leads to Correct word choice
but they
road
blockage because every vehicle moves at once.Therefore
, spoilt roads
and bad traffic
light
Fix the agreement mistake
lights
contributes
to Change the verb form
contribute
road
traffic
.
Nevertheless
, there are several solutions to reduce hold-up
in Fix the agreement mistake
hold-ups
the
urban areas. Correct article usage
apply
Firstly
, the government should ensure that road
project
are given to a proficient contractor and it is well built with solid materials to avoid breakage. To illustrate, after the construction of the central Fix the agreement mistake
projects
road
that leads to market
in my area by Julius and co group of companies a Correct article usage
the market
well known
contractorAdd a hyphen
well-known
Add a comma
,
road
-block and breakage. Secondly
, traffic
lights should be be
built Remove the redundancy
apply
in
all the major Change preposition
on
roads
in the city and a fine should be given to offenders . If these measures are implemented there will be reduction
Add an article
a reduction
the reduction
of
Change preposition
in
road
congestion.
In conclusion,traffic-jam
in the metropolis Correct your spelling
traffic jams
is
caused by spoilt Correct subject-verb agreement
are
road
and bad Fix the agreement mistake
roads
traffic
light
signal, Fix the agreement mistake
lights
however
, the authorities should build good roads
and make provisions for traffic
light
.Fix the agreement mistake
lights
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