One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest?

Traffic
congestion has become a major problem in most cities
as a result
of bad
roads
and non-functional
traffic
light
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lights
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.
However
,
this
can be solved by
construction
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the construction
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of good
roads
and
provision
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the provision
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of
traffic
light
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by the government. To start with, one of the major reasons for
traffic
in cities
are
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is
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bad
roads
.To elucidate
further
, the city
centers
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centres
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are badly damaged with potholes and the
the
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roads
are narrow
this
made most drivers
to
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drive at a slow pace and carefully in order to avoid being trapped in the potholes
hence
, if they drive without caution their vehicles will get spoilt.
As a result
of doing
this
other cars behind will cue up waiting thereby causing congestion on the
road
.
For example
, a survey conducted by the chairman of
Road
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the Road
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safety corps
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Safety Corps
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Imo chapter revealed that the rate of
traffic
in
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Owerri is outrageous
as a result
of multiple potholes on the
road
.He
further
said that it
get
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worse during the rainy season.
Secondly
, most of the
traffic
light
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lights
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are not functioning.
In other
words
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most people want to meet up at their various places of work,
they
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but they
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lack patience and want to move at once without allowing other cars to take turns by so doing it leads to
road
blockage because every vehicle moves at once.
Therefore
, spoilt
roads
and bad
traffic
light
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lights
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contributes
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to
road
traffic
.
Nevertheless
, there are several solutions to reduce
hold-up
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hold-ups
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in
the
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apply
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urban areas.
Firstly
, the government should ensure that
road
project
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projects
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are given to a proficient contractor and it is well built with solid materials to avoid breakage. To illustrate, after the construction of the central
road
that leads to
market
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in my area by Julius and co group of companies a
well known
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contractor
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,
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there has been no record of
road
-block and breakage.
Secondly
,
traffic
lights should be
be
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built
in
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on
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all the major
roads
in the city and a fine should be given to offenders . If these measures are implemented there will be
reduction
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a reduction
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of
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road
congestion. In conclusion,
traffic-jam
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traffic jams
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in the metropolis
is
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are
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caused by spoilt
road
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roads
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and bad
traffic
light
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lights
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signal,
however
, the authorities should build good
roads
and make provisions for
traffic
light
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lights
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.
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  • public transportation
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  • infrastructure
  • economic strength
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  • car ownership
  • commuting
  • peak hours
  • public transit
  • carpooling
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  • cycling infrastructure
  • congestion charges
  • traffic management systems
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