The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two charts illustrate the material status of all the
people
in both Canada
and Australia
.
Overall
, most of the people
in both countries have been separated but not divorced and married while
the least are divorced. Ther
are no Correct your spelling
There
same sex
marriages in Add a hyphen
same-sex
Australia
.
2% of the population
is divorced in Australia
whereas
7% are widows in Canada
. Single citizens in Australia
are 2% less than those in Canada
. There are more separated but not divorced people
in Australia
as compared to Canada
. 3% of Canada
's population
is same sex
marriage.
Add a hyphen
same-sex
Moreover
, there are more than 17% of married couples in Australia
than in Canada
. The number of people
never
married in Correct pronoun usage
who never
Canada
is just over 2% that in Australia
while
the number of widows in both countries is almost the same. There are no same sex
marriages in Add a hyphen
same-sex
Australia
's population
. The population
in
Change preposition
of
Canada for
widows is equal to Change preposition
Canada's
those
of Correct determiner usage
that
people
never
married.Correct pronoun usage
who never
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