he bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph below shows the world's projected number of people who cannot read or write
according to
region and by gender status for the last
year.
Overall
, there are more illiterate men
than women in all regions. Both developed countries and latin america
have the lowest Change the capitalization
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people
who can't read or write, Correct quantifier usage
number of people
however
more illiterate males and females are found in South Asia.
As noticeable from the diagram, South Asia has the highest illiteracy rate at almost 60% for women and just over 30% for Add a comma
however,
men
whereas
in the developed world
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world,
men
are at about 2% and women at nearly 1%.
However
, for both males and females
the rate of illiteracy is almost equal with 10% and roughly 12% respectively, in the Caribbean.
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females,
Additionally
, Sub-saharan Africa is on
the third position in females with Change preposition
in
highest
illiteracy rate Correct article usage
the highest
while
for men
it was on
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in
the
second place.Correct article usage
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