The bar chart below shows the percentage of households with acccess to the internet in three European countries between 2007 and 2019. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feautures, and make comparisons where relevent.
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illustrate
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illustrates
total
proportion of households who are able to obtain the Add an article
the total
internet
in three particular European countries between 2007 and 2019.
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Internet
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other
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the United Kingdom and Add a comma
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Spain
placed second and third position in the figure respectively.
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their
internet
access
from 70% to 79% between the year
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years
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years
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their
internet
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climbed to approximately 88% in 2013. Unnecessary verb
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90% in 2015. Again they have slight growth in 2017 and 2019 to 92% and 95% respectively. The United Kingdom increased their Change preposition
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internet
facilities for their citizens between 2007 and 2019. Every year
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on growing
theirs
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their
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. In 2007 they are
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internet
access
to 70% in 2009.Again they have a marginal rise in 2011 and 2013 to 78% and 82% respectively. Furthermore
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the figure of 90% in 2017.Correct your spelling
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2019.
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Spain
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years
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Germany
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