IELTS WRITING Task 1. The line graph illustrates the proportion of tourists who visited Brighton attractions in England from 1980 to 2010.

Remarkable information is provided regarding the amount of

visitors

who went to the Brighton local attractions, over a 12-year interval, commencing in 1980 and culminating in 2010. From an

overall

perspective, it can be seen despite the fact that art galleries had a decreasing trend, all other attractions gained fame among individuals and the Pavilion had the most

visitors

in the majority of

years

. By a closer examination, it is obvious that

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stood at 25% in 1980 and experienced a dramatic increase to the adjacent of 50% during 15

years

, before decreasing to 30% in 2010.

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that, in 1980

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art galleries were about 20% of the people which in the next 5

years

it rose to the vicinity of 40% before declining to its' start point in 1990. After that, it sank to 8%

at the end

of the duration. Turning to Pier's

visitors

, by neglecting the fluctuations, it had a growing trend which started at 10% and ended at 22% in 2010. The odd one was the rate of people who went to the festival

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since it had only a slight decrease from 30% during those

years

.