The graphs above give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graphs above give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The first graph illustrates a statistic in dynamic about the number of
computer
owners,
while
the second table demonstrates the level of
eduction
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education
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in comparison between 2002 and 2010. It is evident from the data that the
percent
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percentage
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of
computer
users rose,
as well as
the partition of educated citizens.
Overall
, there was a
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noticeable
trend of
a
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apply
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notebook users
increase
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for a given period of time. There was a stable incline in numbers
at
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apply
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each year for around
a
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apply
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five
percent
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per cent
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,
therefore
the amount of PC owners rose
for
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by
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20
percent
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per cent
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from 58 to 78.
It
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interesting to note that, in all education level segments the number of
computer
users
incresed
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increased
. The more significant
diffrence
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difference
differences
can be seen among those without or just with a high school diploma and
incomplete
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an incomplete
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college degree.
However
,
top
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the top
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educational stages
has
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have
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larger
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the larger
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half of
computer
owners.
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, that partition almost reached 100% in 2010.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words computer with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • computer ownership
  • percentage of the population
  • level of education
  • comparison
  • trend
  • increase/decrease
  • no-qualification
  • secondary
  • post-secondary
  • graduate education
  • digital divide
  • socio-economic factors
  • technological advancement
  • accessibility
  • demographics
  • statistical data
  • data interpretation
  • significant growth
  • fluctuations
  • proliferation
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