The charts below show the most popular films by genre for men and women and general ticket sales for different types of film in the USA in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The charts illustrate the most-wanted films by genre for both men and women and general ticket sales for different types of film in the USA in 2010.

Overall

, what stands out from the charts is that the most popular genre among others was action. Another interesting thing is that the number of men who watched

this

genre was more than women. Looking at the details, the number of males watching action movies was not nearly as high as females, with 40 and 25 in turn.

However

, regarding romantic

comedy

, six times as many girls were interested in it than boys. Another striking point is that the number of both genders who liked

comedy

was twice as many as people who liked

western

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Western

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, with 20 and 10 respectively. The least famous ones were thriller and science fiction,

Change preposition

in wich

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wich

Correct your spelling

which

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girls were less interested than boys. As regards action, it was the most sold type of movie, which was approximately twice as many as

comedy

, at 49 and 24 in turn. The third most sold item was romantic

comedy

at %12, which made it slightly more than thriller at %10. The least purchased one was other genres at %5.

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The charts below show the most popular films by genre for men and women and general ticket sales for different types of film in the USA in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?