The flow chart shows 'trampling', the negative effect of tourists walking in the countryside for the environment. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The flow chart reflects the reason-consequence bond from trampling to erosion and decreased
quality
of soil and vegetation as a result
. However
, there are many steps which can lead to this
, so it is extremely important to know this
structure in order to prevent negative effects from human activity.
First of all, the scheme starts with trampling, which means flattened grass due to
tourists walking in certain areas. Hence
, it leads to damaged flora or compacted ground, then
the first one can become the reason for problems with the reproduction of plants, and they become weaker as well. The second one follows a reduction in air and water quality
in soil, which also
provokes the situation when plants do not reproduce and grow. Finally
, all these things can cause a reduction in vegetation.
Secondly
, bad quality
of all necessary things for plants in the ground causes increased erosion when water runs off the land, which also
leads to reduced vegetation. Finally
, all previous steps end at the point where erosion occurs and the quality
of soil and flora decreases.Submitted by ddoiron on
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