The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of experts in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of experts in 2016 compared with 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph depicts how much one country's
export
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products
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in different categories cost between 2015 and 2016.
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, almost all
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export
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values increased over time, except the value of gems and jewellery
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export
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. Petroleum and engineered
products
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made the highest amount of contributions for that country in 2015 and 2016. In 2015, the value of petroleum
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products'
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export
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was around 60
billion
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dollars
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, representing the most valuable
export
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product compared to its counterparts. Engineered goods made the second-highest contribution with about 58
billion
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dollars
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, and
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is followed by gems and jewellery exports with approximately 42
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dollars
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of contribution in 2015. The amounts of money earned from agricultural
products
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and textiles
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export
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were just above 30
billion
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dollars
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and around 28
billion
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dollars
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respectively. After a year, both petroleum and engineered goods increased to about 62
billion
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dollars
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each.
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the values of textiles and agricultural
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rose to just above 30
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dollars
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, gems and jewellery lost
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marketshare
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market share
of roughly 2
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dollars
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one year later.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words export, products, billion, dollars with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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