The pie charts above show the percentages of industry sectors contributed to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016. Write a report of at least 150 words reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

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The pie charts display to make a comparison of the economy by different sectors

such

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agriculture

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, construction, manufacturing, trade, healthcare, business, hospitality, and government between 2000 and 2016.

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, most of the categories illustrated a modest change in the percentages in the economics of those features in those years.

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, the significant change was in

agriculture

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, since

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category dropped a small minority in 2016, highlighting healthcare and education which keep the same data. In 2000 the major percentage was in

agriculture

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, after hospitality, and government. The lowest was in construction, following finance and manufacturing with an insignificant minority.

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, in 2016 the piece show a big chance in comparison with the data in 2000, since

agriculture

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went down by 10% less and construction kept the same analysis,

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the categories that were with minimum percentages, rising little by little.

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The pie charts above show the percentages of industry sectors contributed to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016. Write a report of at least 150 words reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

In many cities, an increasing number of people do not know their neighbors and there is a lack of a sense of community. What are the causes of this problem? How can it be solved?

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There is no doubt that globalisation has benefited the world by bringing together people, business and nations. People who criticise it stand in the way of progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Politicians personal lives should not be written on newspapers. To what extend, do you agree or disagree?