You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the town council. In your letter, do the following: say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir ,
I am writing
this
letter to you because I just heard about the development plan close to my residential area via radio . This
shopping centre would be great
opportunity for the local people as it will Add an article
a great
brings
Wrong verb form
bring
a lots
of advantages to them .
I really feel majestic as I do not have words to express my excitement because close to Correct the article-noun agreement
a lot
lots
12kms
of radius there is no shopping centre where people can go to buy miscellaneous items . All of us have to travel far to spend leisure time with families and friends. Correct your spelling
12 km
Moreover
, more employments
will be created by the opening.
It would be great for the children Fix the agreement mistake
employment
thus
they will get access to play and enjoy their time in the new premises. Moreover
, the enormous convenience it will bring for local residents will have magnificent impacts. I would like to know about the choice of restaurants and which brands will be choosing
for Change the form of the verb
chosen
this
shopping mall .
I am looking forward to hearing from you .
Yours faithfully,
HarvinderSubmitted by Kaurharvinder2984 on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph presents a single clear idea, expanding upon it with relevant details and examples.
coherence cohesion
Enhance logical structure with better transition words and phrases to improve flow.
coherence cohesion
Include a polite and formal greeting and sign-off appropriate for the context of a letter to a public authority.
task achievement
Fully address all parts of the task by providing more detailed explanations, more developed reasoning, and specific questions seeking further information.
task achievement
Use a consistently formal tone throughout the letter. Avoid overly casual phrases and maintain respectful language.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite