some employers offer their emplyees subsidised membership of gyms and sports clubs. believing that this will make their staff healthier and thus more effective at work. Othe employers see no benefit in doing so. Consider the arguments from both aspects of this possible debate, and reach a conclusion.

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welfare including health quality and performance at work will increase with the subsidised membership of sports clubs.

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acquiring a sponsored membership of gyms point to increased productivity for employees.

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true that health quality may be improved, and offering sports activities that can lead workers to get a healthy lifestyle.

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, it seems that these facilities could impact the rise of employees’ performance

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and job satisfaction at the office.

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as in the middle of the lunch break or after work.

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improvement of life may be higher too.

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from these perks often state that the company should be encouraged to spend more money, which may not be practical for every employer.

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will not be visible to everyone in the workplace.

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their workers by setting up regular exercise classes rather than

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them regular memberships. In conclusion, there are convincing arguments both for and against subsidised gym membership for workers, but I believe that providing these services could bring many benefits

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