This essay question is from Cambridge IELTS 16 Test 4 Writing Task 1. The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

This essay question is from Cambridge IELTS 16 Test 4 Writing Task 1. The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pictorial illustrates the diagram of the recycling process of
plastic
bottles.
Overall
, there are 9 continuous
cycle
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cycles
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starts
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starting
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with waste collection
on
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in
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designated
bin
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bins
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finally
Correct word choice
and finally
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becoming various products.
First,
plastic
waste is being collected in a bin specialized for recycling that will be transported using trucks to the recycling centre to sort between recyclable
plastic
and not. The recyclable
plastic
then
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is then
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compressed into blocks before being passed into
to
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apply
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grinders
processed
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process
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them into
plastic
bits. The
plastic
bits
then
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were then
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washed in a big basin using water.
Next,
the clean
plastic
bits are passed to a pellets machine in which the pellets will be heated and melted to form blocks of raw materials. The raw materials
then
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stacked before going to the next steps. After
that
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that,
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the raw materials will be produced into some collections of products,
such
as shirts, pencils and pens, bottles, tote bags,and lunchboxes.
Lastly
, the cycle process is
then
repeated.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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