This essay question is from Cambridge IELTS 16 Test 4 Writing Task 1. The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pictorial illustrates the diagram of the recycling process of
plastic
bottles. Overall
, there are 9 continuous cycle
Fix the agreement mistake
cycles
starts
with waste collection Wrong verb form
starting
on
designated Change preposition
in
bin
Fix the agreement mistake
bins
finally
becoming various products.
Correct word choice
and finally
First,
plastic
waste is being collected in a bin specialized for recycling that will be transported using trucks to the recycling centre to sort between recyclable plastic
and not. The recyclable plastic
then
compressed into blocks before being passed into Add a missing verb
is then
to
grinders Change preposition
apply
processed
them into Wrong verb form
process
plastic
bits.
The plastic
bits then
washed in a big basin using water. Add a missing verb
were then
Next,
the clean plastic
bits are passed to a pellets machine in which the pellets will be heated and melted to form blocks of raw materials. The raw materials then
stacked before going to the next steps. After Add a missing verb
are then
that
the raw materials will be produced into some collections of products, Add a comma
that,
such
as shirts, pencils and pens, bottles, tote bags,and lunchboxes. Lastly
, the cycle process is then
repeated.Submitted by claudideborah on
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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