This essay question is from Cambridge IELTS 16 Test 4 Writing Task 1. The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pictorial illustrates the diagram of the recycling process of

plastic

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bottles.

Overall

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, there are 9 continuous

cycle

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cycles

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starts

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starting

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with waste collection

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designated

bin

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bins

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finally

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and finally

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becoming various products.

First,

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plastic

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waste is being collected in a bin specialized for recycling that will be transported using trucks to the recycling centre to sort between recyclable

plastic

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and not. The recyclable

plastic

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then

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is then

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compressed into blocks before being passed into

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apply

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grinders

processed

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process

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them into

plastic

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bits. The

plastic

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bits

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then

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were then

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washed in a big basin using water.

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the clean

plastic

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bits are passed to a pellets machine in which the pellets will be heated and melted to form blocks of raw materials. The raw materials

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then

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are then

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stacked before going to the next steps. After

that

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that,

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the raw materials will be produced into some collections of products,

such

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as shirts, pencils and pens, bottles, tote bags,and lunchboxes.

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, the cycle process is

then

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repeated.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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7
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

154 words

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This essay question is from Cambridge IELTS 16 Test 4 Writing Task 1. The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Some people think that professional athletes make good role models for young people, while others believe they don’t. Discuss both these points of views and give your own opinion.