The bar graph below shows the amount of carbon emissions in different countries during three different years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph below demonstrates the amount of carbon emission in the
USA
, Germany, UK, China, Canada
and India during three various years. As you can see it is clear that
the greatest among are blonge
to the Correct your spelling
blonde
USA
and China in 2005.
According to
the graph, the USA
in 2005 had the most
amount Correct word choice
highest
about
1, 600, 000. Change preposition
apply
Also
, Germany in 1975 and 1990 had the same amount nearly 300, 000. In addition
, It is obvious that all the 6 countries except the USA
have the least
among in 1975 and 1990. Correct word choice
lowest
Furthermore
, As you can
know Verb problem
apply
Canada
had the fewest among in during 3 several years. Also
, In 2005 Canada
and the UK has
Wrong verb form
had
same
among about 150, 000. Correct article usage
the same
Moreover
, In 1975 India had the fewest among approximately 10, 000, while
the United States of America had the most among in 1975.
In conclusion, Canada
has the fewest among in during 3 different years, while
the USA
have the greatest among.Submitted by bazarjanimohammadreza83 on
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