Although the prices of fuels have greatly increased over the last decade or two, it is argued that further increases in fuel prices are the only way to reduce world consumption of fuel and lesson pressure on worlds fuel resources To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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Over the
last
decade
the costs of Add a comma
decade,
fuel
have definitely risen and it can be argued that an increase in fuel
price will enhance global economic security. However
, it is not the only way to lessen the consumption of fuel
.To get my point across,i
will present some Change the capitalization
I
well supported
arguments in Add a hyphen
well-supported
this
essay.
Firstly
, as we know, in our society , fuel
resources are not that limited, for
this
reason
government or social scientists should bring new innovations. Add the comma(s)
reason,
Moreover
, people argue that countries with lack
of financial support physically can not afford the high level Correct article usage
a lack
fuel
costs. Change preposition
of fuel
For instance
, in Kazakhstan , the majority of unemployed males or even females depend on their income from public transportation. These drivers typically pay for the gas themselves using the money they earn by driving on passengers. For that reason , deprived individuals can not survive in these kinds of circumstances.
On the other hand
, political ideologies shows
that with Change the verb form
show
this
gas prices
increase , a lot of reaction occurs, Fix the agreement mistake
price
such
as dramatic
rise in food costs or other sectors . Correct article usage
a dramatic
Due to
this
, inhabitants will take many rallies in the streets , after conflicts may
appear among themselves and Verb problem
apply
this
can only lead to the
global economic crises.
In conclusion , even though Correct article usage
apply
if
Correct word choice
apply
fuel
price
Fix the agreement mistake
prices
is
about to increase Correct subject-verb agreement
are
it
could have Correct pronoun usage
they
a
little impact on Correct article usage
apply
global
consumption of fossil fuels. Correct article usage
the global
However
, rising fuel
prices may lead to the failure of our economic system due to
a lack of financial resources and effect
of rising figures in all other products.Correct article usage
the effect
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task achievement
Be sure to fully respond to all parts of the task. While you have touched on the points, there's room to further clarify and develop your position on fuel prices and consumption.
coherence cohesion
Aim for clarity when presenting ideas. Ensure that your arguments are comprehensive and flow logically from one to the next. Developing clear topic sentences can help with this.
task achievement and coherence cohesion
Back up your main points with specific examples and details. It is important to illustrate your viewpoints with concrete evidence or examples to strengthen your argument.
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