the pie charts show the percentage of watre used for fifferent purposes in six areas of the world.

the pie charts show the percentage of watre used for fifferent purposes in six areas of the world.
The following pie chart illustrates the percentage of water used for different reasons in six parts of the world. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the per cent of water
abused
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in Industrial
use
, Agricultural
use
, and Domestic
use
in several zones around the world.
According to
the figure, South
America
, Africa, Central
Asia
, and South East
Asia
use
the highest percentage of water in the Agricultural area,
However
, North
America
and Europe have a lower percentage than other regions. Taking a closer look at the second sector, In Industrial
use
Europe and North
America
have the biggest percentages except for another environment. As for remainings, In Domestic
Use
, 13%, 19%, 15%, 9%, 7%, 7%, North
America
, South
America
, Europe, Africa, Central
Asia
, South East
Asia
perspective.
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