the pie charts show the percentage of watre used for fifferent purposes in six areas of the world.
The following pie chart illustrates the percentage of water used for different reasons in six parts of the world.
Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the per cent of water abused
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is abused
use
, Agricultural use
, and Domestic use
in several zones around the world.
According to
the figure, South America
, Africa, Central Asia
, and South East Asia
use
the highest percentage of water in the Agricultural area, However
, North America
and Europe have a lower percentage than other regions.
Taking a closer look at the second sector, In Industrial use
Europe and North America
have the biggest percentages except for another environment.
As for remainings, In Domestic Use
, 13%, 19%, 15%, 9%, 7%, 7%, North America
, South America
, Europe, Africa, Central Asia
, South East Asia
perspective.Submitted by Zolboo on
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