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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in toda's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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 presents information about the cost of
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 in Japan, France, Germany and the USA from 1994 to 2004. The
overall
 trend shown in the data was the highest
price
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bananas
 per
kilogram
 was in Japan.
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a steep drop in 1996,
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 a rise in 2003. Prices for
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 dipped in 2001 and made up approximately 1,60 dollars per
kilogram
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 it can be inferred that the smallest
price
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bananas
 remained stable,
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 1,20 dollars per
kilogram
.
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, the
price
 of
bananas
 per
kilogram
 was one of the cheapest in Germany - from 1,40 to 1,20 dollars per
kilogram
.
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 prices fluctuated, starting from 1994. Prices for
bananas
 dipped in 2000 in France and Germany. By the end of
2003
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 the
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 two countries - France and Japan.
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task achievement
Make sure to address the prompt directly. Your essay should discuss the importance of history as a subject compared to science and technology.
coherence and cohesion
Develop a clear introduction and conclusion, clearly stating the topic and your opinion on it. The conclusion should summarize the main points made in the essay.
coherence and cohesion
Enhance logical structure by including topic sentences at the beginning of each paragraph to introduce the main ideas, and use linking words to connect ideas within and across paragraphs.
task achievement
Incorporate more detailed examples that directly relate to the significance of history as a school subject, as well as the importance of science and technology in today's world.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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