The graph below shows the number of complaints made about noise to Environmental Health authorities in the city of Newtown between 1980 and 1996. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The structure shows the number of
complaints
about noise contamination Environmental Health authorities between two dates : 1980 and 1996.
We can see that the places that attracts the more complaints
about noises
are the domesctic or household and the factories. However
, the road noise complaints
shows an important evolution between these dates.
We can see that domestic places are the main source of noises
complaints
from 1990 to 1996, but they did not from 1980 to 1988. This
shows the consequences of industrial revolution in civil construction activity. Building like houses seem to have evolved a lot, increasing from 550 to more than 1200. Besides
, the factories's noises
complaints
decreased, also
demonstrating the big impact of industrial revolution in our society.
Also
, traffics noises
complaints
seems to become more and more important , for exemple, from 1990 to 1992 it increased a lot, from 350 to 450 people complaining aproximately. This
shows that the use of the car or other motorcycles became more important over the years, leading to more "noise pollution", and more complaints
. We can compare the evolution of domestic or household with the traffic noises
, since it is very similar : both increased during the same years but not with the same importants.Submitted by santos_dij on
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