The map below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write atleast 150 words.

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The information given

abouth

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about

the current and future developmental site of Norbition town are

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depicted

in the

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rendered

pictorgram

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pictogram

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, it can be seen that

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noticable

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noticeable

changes will

be take

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place in the future plan.

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with, there will no changes would

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about the town on

west

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river

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the river

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on the north will be

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segregated

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by the roadway which leads to the new housing system on the north side.

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, it

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reduce

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the

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of farmland and will be moved towards

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the north

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north east

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region.

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, a new

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will be created

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the south.

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, towards the east factories will be replaced by the housing scheme,

playarea

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play area

and

school

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. In between the two

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and shops will take place on

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and west

side

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respectively.

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the north-west

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north-west

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northwest

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area will be replaced by

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housing

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pathway

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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3 paragraphs

146 words

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Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.