Professional workers like doctors, nurses and teachers make a greater contribution to society and so should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, the important jobs in the world are
doctors
, nurses
and teacher
which support Fix the agreement mistake
teachers
community
and help them. Correct article usage
the community
While
some people spend money more on sports and entertainment. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this
statement and I will explain more about why should people give cash to doctors
, nurses
, and teachers.
There are many reasons that make this
careers Correct determiner usage
these
had
Wrong verb form
have
alot
benefits to society. Correct your spelling
a lot
Firstly
, the
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apply
doctors
and nurses
have big
responsibility where they deal with people's health and lives, Correct article usage
a big
while
sports and entertainment do not carry the same degree of responsibility. For example
, if any one
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anyone
sick
or injured, the doctor will treat you and supervise your health condition. Add a missing verb
is sick
Secondly
, doctors
and teachers require specialized and continuing education and training to maintain a high level of expertise and competence.
On other
hand, these jobs need a lot of personal effort from employers. Correct article usage
the other
For instance
, Health care and education require greater personal dedication and close interaction with individuals than leisure activities. In addition
, doctors
and nurses
deal with emergencies and life circumstances that may be psychologically stressful, warranting greater financial compensation. Teachers are all involved in building society and shaping the future of generations, and this
creates the importance of their role and justifies their appreciation.
To sum up
, We must value these professions and give them enough money. I believe that this
issue depends on societal values and personal priorities.Submitted by maltobi08 on
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