You’re visiting a town where you once worked. Write to a friend you worked with there. Include the following in your letter: Tell your friend about your life now Give him/her details of your visit Arrange how you can meet.
Dear Ajay,
Hope you are doing well. It's
being
a long Wrong verb form
been
time
we
met, and Correct word choice
since we
fortunately
Add a comma
fortunately,
i
am coming there Change the capitalization
I
by
next week. It would be great Change preposition
apply
seeing
you again and spend Change the verb form
to see
time
with you.
Let me elaborate the
scenario. After getting apart, Change preposition
on the
i
decided to move to Halifax, over here Change the capitalization
I
i
completed my studies and have decided to pursue my career at Change the capitalization
I
this
location. Currently, i
work here as a chef and prepare various Change the capitalization
I
cusines
as per customer needs. I will be coming there by next week via flight. The timing for the plane is 4 PM, but after completing all the Correct your spelling
cuisines
cuisine
procedure
it can take me Fix the agreement mistake
procedures
upto
an additional 2 hours. It would be great if you Correct your spelling
up to
can
come to pick me up at Terminal 2 by that Wrong verb form
could
time
.
Moreover
, if you can come than
we shall have Replace the word
then
a
dinner in a restaurant. If you Correct article usage
apply
are agree
with Change the verb form
agree
this
, than
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then
i
can make a booking as Change the capitalization
I
i
Change the capitalization
I
got
many contacts over there Verb problem
have
which
serve the best North- Indian food. Correct pronoun usage
who
It
would be gratefulCorrect pronoun usage
I
,
if you Remove the comma
apply
can
spare some Wrong verb form
could
time
and come for the meet-up.
Thanks for your consideration.
Yours Faithfully
Jay ChawlaSubmitted by hlife4454 on
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Greeting and Closing
Open with a warmer, more personal greeting and include a closing that is equally warm to improve the tone and engagement of your letter.
Logical Structure
Structure the content into clear, separate paragraphs to address each of the points in a more organised fashion: one for your current life, one for details of your visit, and one for arranging the meeting.
Task Achievement
Provide a brief mention of your past experiences together to offer context and to make the letter more personalized and engaging.
Coherence and Cohesion
Use a variety of sentence structures and paragraph links to improve the flow of the letter, avoiding abrupt transitions between thoughts.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,