You’re visiting a town where you once worked. Write to a friend you worked with there. Include the following in your letter: Tell your friend about your life now Give him/her details of your visit Arrange how you can meet.

Dear Ajay, Hope you are doing well. It's
being
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been
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a long
time
we
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since we
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met, and
fortunately
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i
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I
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am coming there
by
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next week. It would be great
seeing
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to see
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you again and spend
time
with you. Let me elaborate
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scenario. After getting apart,
i
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decided to move to Halifax, over here
i
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I
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completed my studies and have decided to pursue my career at
this
location. Currently,
i
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work here as a chef and prepare various
cusines
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cuisines
cuisine
as per customer needs. I will be coming there by next week via flight. The timing for the plane is 4 PM, but after completing all the
procedure
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it can take me
upto
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up to
an additional 2 hours. It would be great if you
can
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come to pick me up at Terminal 2 by that
time
.
Moreover
, if you can come
than
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then
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we shall have
a
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dinner in a restaurant. If you
are agree
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with
this
,
than
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then
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i
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can make a booking as
i
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got
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many contacts over there
which
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serve the best North- Indian food.
It
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would be grateful
,
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if you
can
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could
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spare some
time
and come for the meet-up. Thanks for your consideration. Yours Faithfully Jay Chawla
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Greeting and Closing
Open with a warmer, more personal greeting and include a closing that is equally warm to improve the tone and engagement of your letter.
Logical Structure
Structure the content into clear, separate paragraphs to address each of the points in a more organised fashion: one for your current life, one for details of your visit, and one for arranging the meeting.
Task Achievement
Provide a brief mention of your past experiences together to offer context and to make the letter more personalized and engaging.
Coherence and Cohesion
Use a variety of sentence structures and paragraph links to improve the flow of the letter, avoiding abrupt transitions between thoughts.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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