The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)

The bar graphs depict data of people who have their own

computer

in

percentage

over a span of eight years from 2002 to 2010, and the information by showing the five types of education

level

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levels

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in 2002 and 2010.

Overall

, the first graph reveals that the

percentage

of

population

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the population

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in 2010 outpaced

in

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that in

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2002 among all kinds of school levels. The trend of data was gradually increased from 2002 to 2010. It is obvious that the highest number of people who have personal

computer

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computers

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was in 2010,

whereas

the

least

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lowest

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amount of

computer

owners was in 2002.

According to

students who

were

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had

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in non-high school diploma, the

percentage

of their own

computer

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computers

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went up significantly more than a half compared to 2002 and 2010,

estimate

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at 25

percents

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percent

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. Meanwhile,

percentage

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the percentage

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of high school

graduate

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graduates

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and college were

also

surged. Looking at

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the master

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master

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master's

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degree level, the data

of

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on

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having

computer

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a computer

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was 75

percent

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per cent

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in 2002

while

in 2010 was nearly

reach

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reached

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to

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apply

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90

percent

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per cent

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, which was the highest category of education level compared to the others in the same year.