The line graph illustrates how much money was spent on watching films in 3 primary forms namely cinemas, DVDs and legal download as well as the percentage split among the three forms given in the pie charts.

The line graph shows the

trend

of the amount of money spent through 3 different media (

Cinema

ticket

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,

DVD

, and Legal Download) to watch movies . Each

medium

data was gathered for 6

years

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in 2005. The 2 given pie charts

then

compare the

percentage

of each

medium

for the beginning year and the

last

year the data

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.

Overall

, all of the forms to enjoy the films had upward trends with different increasing rates.

However

, the proportion was still dominated by

DVD

rental over 6

years

even though its

percentage

went down.

Cinema

ticket

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became the

most

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favourite

medium

for people to spend their money in 2005. The

trend

increased consistently and significantly compared to the other 2 media.

As a result

, in 2011 the price of the

ticket

reached 14 pounds. Meanwhile,

DVD

had a similar

trend

as ticketing with only a 2 pounds increase over 6

years

of time. The

trend

never went down,

although

the

increasing

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rate was not as steep as the

cinema

ticket

.

On the other hand

, Legal Download

finally

managed to surpass the price of

DVD

at just

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pound gap in 2011 after it fell significantly from

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in

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2007. For the

percentage

of these ways to watch movies, the domination of

DVD

in 2005 remained until 2011,

nevertheless

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it declined by 8%. The bigger decreasing proportion happened to money spent on

cinema

ticket

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, where the number went down by 12% from 30% in 2005. The number of people who

prefered

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preferred

to watch movies online,

however

, became the only

medium

which increased. The

percentage

went up drastically from 6% in 2005 to 26% in the next 6

years

.