The line graph illustrates how much money was spent on watching films in 3 primary forms namely cinemas, DVDs and legal download as well as the percentage split among the three forms given in the pie charts.

The line graph shows the

trend

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of the amount of money spent through 3 different media (

Cinema

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ticket

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,

DVD

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, and Legal Download) to watch movies . Each

medium

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data was gathered for 6

years

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started

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in 2005. The 2 given pie charts

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compare the

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of each

medium

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for the beginning year and the

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year the data

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.

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, all of the forms to enjoy the films had upward trends with different increasing rates.

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, the proportion was still dominated by

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rental over 6

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even though its

percentage

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went down.

Cinema

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ticket

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became the

most

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favourite

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for people to spend their money in 2005. The

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increased consistently and significantly compared to the other 2 media.

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, in 2011 the price of the

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reached 14 pounds. Meanwhile,

DVD

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had a similar

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as ticketing with only a 2 pounds increase over 6

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of time. The

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never went down,

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the

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rate was not as steep as the

cinema

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ticket

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.

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, Legal Download

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managed to surpass the price of

DVD

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at just

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pound gap in 2011 after it fell significantly from

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in

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2007. For the

percentage

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of these ways to watch movies, the domination of

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in 2005 remained until 2011,

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it declined by 8%. The bigger decreasing proportion happened to money spent on

cinema

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ticket

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, where the number went down by 12% from 30% in 2005. The number of people who

prefered

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preferred

to watch movies online,

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, became the only

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which increased. The

percentage

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went up drastically from 6% in 2005 to 26% in the next 6

years

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.