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(Table) The table below gives information related to population growth, average birth per woman, life expectancy at birth in countries with different income levels in 2000 and 2004. Summarise the information making comparisons where relevant.

(Table) The table below gives information related to population growth, average birth per woman, life expectancy at birth in countries with different income levels in 2000 and 2004. Summarise the information making comparisons where relevant.
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The given table illustrates the data of three different
countries
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 regarding the
population
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 growth, average
birth
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 of each woman and
life
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expectancy
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 at
birth
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 between 2002 and 2004. The differences of the country were divided into three categories based on their income, high, middle and low.
Overall
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, it can clearly be seen that high-income
countries
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 have the lowest figure for
population
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 growth and
birth
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,
however
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life
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expectancy
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 was the highest, in both years. As the table shows, from 2002 to 2004, high-income
countries
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 experienced a decline rate of the
population
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 by 0.1%, the same trend
also
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 occurred in low-income
countries
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 by 0.2%. Women who gave
birth
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 fell as well, from 3.9 to 3.7 in the low-income
countries
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,
whereas
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 the number in high-income
countries
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 is only below half. Meanwhile, in middle-income
countries
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,
population
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 growth accounted for 0.9% in both years, baby
birth
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 dropped slightly by 0.1 and
life
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expectancy
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 rose by 0.9, all the rates were in the mid-level compared with other
countries
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. Regarding
life
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expectancy
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, all
countries
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 encountered a small increase, with high-income
countries
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 with the biggest number. High-income
countries
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 stand at 78 and 78.7, respectively. Meanwhile
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the lowest-income city has a low
life
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expectancy
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 at 58.1 and 58.8, individually.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 65%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, population, birth, life, expectancy with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Population growth rate
  • Average birth per woman
  • Life expectancy at birth
  • Income levels
  • Significant increase/decrease
  • Trends
  • Demographic factors
  • Correlations
  • Improvements
  • Declines
  • Statistics
  • Comparisons
  • High-income countries
  • Low-income countries
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