Giving
money
to developing
countries
from
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countryFix the agreement mistake
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, will not be able to solve
country'sCorrect article usage
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poverty
. That's why
that Correct determiner usage
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rich
countries
should
support
another type of
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instead
of financial
support
. I completely agree with
this
opinion and in
this
essay, I will
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the reasons
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my view. I completely agree with
this
opinion because giving financial aid
support
would be
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solution for poor
countries
.
It is true that supporting financial can
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the
countries'Change noun form
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poverty
forChange preposition
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aCorrect article usage
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moment or short
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, but helping them by supporting
in Change preposition
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education will be the better solution for the long term.
This
is because
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the main reason
ofChange preposition
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poverty
is
lackCorrect article usage
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of
goodCorrect article usage
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education system in that
country
.
For instance
, our
country
,
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is poor and
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a lot of help
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rich
countries
like Japan and
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since the years ago.But most of the help
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building a bridge and donating
money
to use for necessary things. By use of these, our government can solve the problem for a
while
, after that we
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still
keepVerb problem
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poor as usual.
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most
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for holding to my view is that
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financial
aidsChange the noun form
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support
areCorrect subject-verb agreement
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not
as helping these
countries
to develop in their
tourism
field. The
tourism
business is a great one to increase the
country
's foreign income. That's why
wealthyAdd an article
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countryFix the agreement mistake
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should
support
to
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tourism
in
poorAdd an article
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instead
of giving
money
.
Additionally
,
those Change the determiner
that country
those countries
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country
who get the help will know how to find the
money
from
tourism
.
they will
be knowChange the verb form
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by upgrading the
tourism
field and they will
be reachChange the verb form
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the way to rich.
In conclusion, I totally agree with the opinion that supporting financial
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can not resolve the
poverty
of
countryAdd an article
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.
This
is because getting
money
is not a way to
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, having
the Remove the article
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enough knowledge and constant income are the main facts of wealthy.