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The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table represents how many people lived in Argentina,
Indonesia
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, Italy, and the
Republic
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 of
Korea
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 in 2003 with its prediction for the years 2025 and 2050. Looking from an
overall
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 perspective, it is readily apparent that the population in all countries is predicted to grow, except for the
Republic
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 of
Korea
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. At first sight, it can be clearly seen that
Indonesia
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's residents are the most among other countries. In terms of population in 2003,
Indonesia
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 had 238
million
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 people living there,
this
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 was almost four times higher than the second one, Italy, with 54
million
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 folks. The
Republic
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 of
Korea
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 ranked third with 48
million
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, slightly above Argentina (34
million
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). In the future,
Indonesia
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 is forecasted to rise and reach 274 and 312
million
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 individuals in 2025 and 2050, respectively.
This
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 trend is similar to Argentina, the number of citizens is expected to increase to 48
million
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 in 2025 and 62
million
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 in 2050.
In contrast
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, Italians are estimated to decrease by 47 and 45
million
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 in 2025 and 2050,
accordingly
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. For the
Republic
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 of
Korea
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, it is projected to have a marginal improvement to 52
million
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 humans in 2025 and 2050.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words indonesia, republic, korea, million with synonyms.
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