The two graphs show the main sources of energy in the USA in the 1980s and the 1990s. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the changes which occurred.

The two graphs show the main sources of energy in the USA in the 1980s and the 1990s.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the changes which occurred.
These pie charts depict the percentage of the main sources in the US in two
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. It is from the graph that, there are five essential sources.
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what is shown, in 1980, as we can see oil was the most resource used, after
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we have natural gas nearly considered a quarter, about 10 per cent left is minor. In 1990, we have oil as the most popular one in that era by the
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we can see the natural source taken the quarter of the useg, slightly over the quarter we can see coal by 27 per cent, they had used the power of the hydroelectric and the energy of the nuclear and that represents just 15 per cent.
To sum up
, we could say that the two graphs are approximately the same, there are a few differences,
such
as the oil we can see a decrease of around 9%.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sources of energy
  • predominant
  • renewables
  • nuclear
  • significant increases
  • significant decreases
  • technological advancements
  • policy changes
  • trends
  • overall
  • preference
  • shifts
  • implications
  • future energy landscape
  • decades
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