The chart below shows the number of men and women (in thousand) in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the data about the number of
male
and Fix the agreement mistake
males
female
(in Fix the agreement mistake
females
thousand
) in Fix the agreement mistake
thousands
further
education in the UK during three terms and divided into two categories. Overall
, it can be seen that there was a wide gap between the two programs. However
, the number of females increased steadily.
In
the beginning of the period, there Change the preposition
At
are
1000 Wrong verb form
were
male
enrolled in part-time education, which was more than female students with only around 800. After it experienced a decline, the Fix the agreement mistake
males
men
rate Change noun form
men's
was manage
to rise slightly to approximately 900. Meanwhile, there was a significant soar in the total of women pupils, by 300 to reach Change the verb form
managed
at
1,150.
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apply
On the other hand
, the amount
of people who Change the quantifier
number
join
Wrong verb form
joined
full-time
Correct article usage
the full-time
course
was considerably lower. In the first cycle, under 200 men studied, which was five times lower than the other category. It rose moderately and arrived at almost 300. Fix the agreement mistake
courses
In addition
, similar to the previous group, there was only a small proportion of women participation, although
it levelled up to 200 during the period.Submitted by sidneynatasha16 on
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