The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The infographic illustrates data of amount of population who are illiterate, in percentage, in six different areas of the world for
last
year.
Overall
, what stands out from the diagram is that many people are not able to read and write in many parts of the world.
whereas
, women constitute the greatest proportion. The gender gap was so dramatic in South
Asia
, Arab States and Sub-Saharan Africa.
While
,
this
difference dropped rapidly in East
Asia
, Latin American and Developed
countries
. Looking at the details, South
Asia
, Arab States, and Sub-Saharan Africa are among the regions which
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the highest rate of people who are unable to read and write, with nearly 70 per cent of men and almost 35 per cent of women, respectively, for South
Asia
.
This
proportion has remarkably decreased for the other three areas namely, East
Asia
, Latin America and Developed
Countries
. Developed
Countries
has
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(approximately two
percent
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) the smallest ratio among all six
countries
that
is
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surveyed.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Illiteracy rates
  • Region
  • Gender disparity
  • Bar chart
  • Estimated
  • Summarise
  • Main features
  • Comparisons
  • Analyzing
  • Discrepancies
  • Significant
  • Pronounced
  • Speculation
  • Male
  • Female
  • Global perspective
  • Literacy
  • Educational attainment
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Cultural influences
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