Some people believe that it is important give gifts to friends and family to show that we care about them.Others think that there are better ways to show that we care. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some humans say that it is significant to donate gifts to friends and family members to express that
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we are
we were
about
them. Other Change preposition
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group
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groups
people
believe that there are better methods to express which
our attention. In light of the presents are really attractive and it helps you that you have an argument with your close person. But there are Correct pronoun usage
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another
ways Correct quantifier usage
other
besides
that, that is
talking with them or visiting your familiar human. I agree with second
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.
On the one hand, gift giving
is a great idea. The best thing that to give a gift to Add a hyphen
gift-giving
person
who has fought. Because Add an article
the person
a person
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most individuals love to receive bestowals. If the Correct article usage
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people
who you respect them
are upset with you, you can do Correct pronoun usage
apply
this
to cheer them up. However
you can Add a comma
However,
also
bestow the
presents on holidays or any special days. Correct article usage
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This
way you can show them your homage. For example
, many people
now emphasize their love for their mothers or sisters by giving them flowers.
On the other hand
, talking with them or telling them you are sorry after a fight is also
a good technique. To show our love for people
, even if we tell them that we are liking. They will be happy with us. Moreover
, it is also
good to visit them as a sign of our esteem per them. We should go to see them. For instance
, given that face-to-face meetings are on the decline these days, so is affection, too. Because of this
, visiting relatives is important.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that conversation and visiting are of
the best ways to express our trust and attention to Change preposition
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people
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The essay response needs to fully address the question and present a clear position throughout the response. Ensure that both views are discussed equally and that your opinion is stated clearly and developed with specific examples.
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coherence and cohesion
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