You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at hame now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter. -Explain the important event -Epologise for the situotion -Suggest a new arrangement
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Dear Anora,
The purpose of writing to many
friend
is that I cannot go to Canada
The reason why I can't go to yours is because my plane was delayed Change to a plural noun
friends
due to
malfunctions and we couldn't fly to Canada.There was a fire at the airport and many places were damaged, but no one was hurt.
Everyone was leaving tje
registration desk,suddenly everyone started screaming, and I saw that most of your people were running to Correct your spelling
the
wards
us, and I got scared.It was a very bad situation,but I panickedWrong verb form
ward
all
.The person there evacuated Correct pronoun usage
apply
whole
outside and made them stronger.Later we found out that the fire Correct article usage
the whole
stanted
Correct your spelling
started
from
the kitchen and spread to other places and a large area was burnt to ashes.
That's why the flight was postponed for 1 month, if God wants,we will fight after 1 month,friend.I have a proposal for you.After I go to Canada,would you be willing to take me Change preposition
in
every where
Correct your spelling
everywhere
.
I'm very Change the punctuation
?
interesting
in going there Replace the word
interested
becouse
I heard it's very beautiful.Wait for me,I'll be there soon.
I hope you will reply soon
Yours Correct your spelling
because
scincerely
,
Vazira shodmonovaCorrect your spelling
sincerely
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greeting and closing
Ensure the letter has a clear structure with an appropriate opening and closing formula. Greet your friend properly at the beginning and use a suitable sign-off at the end.
single idea per paragraph
Keep each paragraph focused on a single idea, expanding on each aspect requested in the task: the event, the apology, and the new arrangement.
complete response
Aim to provide a complete response to the task by clearly explaining the important event, offering a sincere apology, and suggesting a specific new date or time frame for the visit.
suitable writing tone
Use a respectful and friendly tone throughout the letter, appropriate for writing to a friend. Avoid overly casual language, but dont over-formalize it either.
logical structure
Improve the coherence of the letter by organizing your ideas more logically. Start with a short explanation about the change of plans, followed by a detailed explanation, the apology, and then the new arrangement. Use transitional phrases to guide the reader.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,